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Gold dust and steel meet under the skyline,
18.03.14
Turning and changing toward a new day,
Take me away to steely-grey water,
The edge of the water,
Where I used to play
Sea spray comes crashing in peals of white laughter,
A perfect reminder of lost yesterday
Luminous footsteps kick up the gold-dust,
The wind whips around me,
And begs me to stay
Sing me a song of tides that are constant,
Moving but always remaining the same,
Carries away forgotten sweet moments,
The steel and the gold-dust
Are wild and untamed
Cotton-white clouds raging above me
Spinning a sea-shell and tales of sea spray
My fingers are sifting the sand in the water,
Asking its memories
To take me away
If gold-dust remembers and could be reminded,
The steely wild water would whisper my name,
And I would say maybe part of me belongs here,
The beachcombing playmate,
A daughter of waves
Gold-dust and steel meet under the skyline,
Turning and changing forever to stay
And as I walk down to the edge of the water,
The memories whisper
And take me away
18.03.14
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EDIT: 23/04/14 I owns second in he the contest I entered this in! The judge was so nice and complementary of it, and she has been to Scotland, too! She said her favourite thing about it was my "lyrical description of light" 
and she complemented my fur sons badge, too!!!
I wrote this for a poetry competition XD the theme is "something special"
I wrote this about Montrpse beach, one of my fave places in the world.
and she complemented my fur sons badge, too!!! I wrote this for a poetry competition XD the theme is "something special"
I wrote this about Montrpse beach, one of my fave places in the world.
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What a fun read. I like the constant flow of the words, almost like waves carrying me back to childhood visits to the beach.